Sunday, November 13, 2011

Core Essay

        The 13 colonies( located in the East coast of the U.S now) were once overruled by England, meaning that England had colonized the land; killing several of Native  Americans which shaped the colonies future. Between the settlement at Jamestown in 1607 and the Treaty of Paris in 1763, the most important change that occurred in the colonies was the Emergence of a society quite different from that in England. Changes in religion, economics, politics, and social structure illustrate this Americanization of transplanted Europeans.
       By 1763, although some colonies still maintained established churches, other colonies had accomplished  a virtual revolution for religious toleration and separation of church and state. The Magna Carta influenced "that the English Church shall be free" creating for example Maryland to have religious freedom. Several individuals decided to move to Maryland just to practice their religions and it brought more colonist to Maryland. However,when King Henry of England decided to remarry, the priest rejected the remarriage causing for King Henry to start a new religion, the Anglicans, and separating the power of religion and the rulers of England. Religion in the colonies changed the diversity of colonist migrating, decreasing some and increasing others. Slaves could not practice any religion in the colonies because they were not to have those right and many more. Religion in the colonies caused for some individuals to be racist against the Native Americans and Slaves because the English church believed that Natives did not have any souls, making them worth nothing. Religion made several colonist to believe in a hell or a Heaven telling them if they do not attend church then they are going to hell. Religion in the 13 colonies changed the perspectives of how people should view the world, the leaders of the colonies and how they should be judge according to church officials even though, some people ignored religion and stuck to working.
         In a similar economic revolution, the colonies outgrew the mercantilist relationship with the mother country and developed an expanding capitalist system of their own. After the French-Indian War the British were left with a huge debt to pay for the cost of the war. Great Britain, decided to pass the Stamp Act in March 22, 1765 " For every skin or piece of vellum or parchment, or sheet or piece of paper, ...a stamp is required" using the taxes of the Stamp Act to pay for the money borrowed from Great Britain. Most colonist and people living in the colonies angered because they hardly had enough money for their-selves and now they had to pay extra for a stamp. Furthermore, more Acts started to pass in the colonies causing for colonist fight the soldiers for their rights and rebelling against Great Britain for all the acts passed for taxes. The colonist or Bostonians disliked Great Britain and did not buy any of their goods; leading to several protest and even wars against Britain for the independence of the colonies.
         Building on English foundations of political liberty, the colonist extended the concepts of liberty ans self-government far beyond those envisioned in the mother country. The Boston Massacre in which Bostonians from the colonies were coldly murdered by English soldiers in which the captain asked " Why don't you fire?" commanding the attack towards unarmed protesters. The protesters were protesting to the soldiers telling them did  they took their jobs. The soldiers got away with the murdering of the protesters. The new Acts passed by Britain  created a revolution against the right of the colonies.Furthermore, Great Britain decided to sent more troops to the colonies to calm down the situation. However, the colonies noticed the way Great Britain treated them just using them to collect money and decided to become independent of them by fighting against each other in a war.
           In contrast, to the well-defined and hereditary classes of England, the colonies developed a fluid class structure which enabled the industrious individuals to rise in the social ladder. From the first colonization of Columbus which mixes the social classes of Native American and Spaniards to the Headright System of Virginia (which states to give land to any colonist and the religious movement) brought more people to the colonies and created the diverse of people living in the 13 colonies. Slavery brought from Africa to the colonies caused racism and the association with the English creating new mixed races in the colonies. However, the upper class Great Britain  in the colonies was in control of  every decisioned and laws passed in the colonies. The upper class would send one official to each colony to make sure things are going the way Great Britain wants. The middle class in the colonies consisted of land owners of a plantation of slaves and the lower class consisted of slaves and poor English whites with little money. The social and diverse classes joined forces to win the independence they all wanted to be free from Great Britain and their lousy Acts.
           The 13 colonies religion influenced the colonist and even Great Britain, of what to believe and what not to believe in. The Stamp Acts and all the Acts passed by Great Britain changed the believes of the colonists living in the colonies, getting them furious and rebellious against the British. From the starting of the colonies the British had total control over the colonies but now that the colonies were already establish the colonies decided to be free from the British. The new ideas from the Great Awakening from church officials subjected on the idea of a free land and also mentioned new non-religions topics of the economical issues in The Americas. The empowerment, and even though the colonies were poor brought hope to The Americas and raised the belligerence of a new world not controlled by the evil Great Britain.
         

1 comment:

  1. Thesis/Argument It is very well developed because I like the way you state your argument and you know what you stand for and what your defending.
    Critical Thought was really good you were able to defend your position in my opinion you were able to explain the quotes well and summer rise what they said. you knew what you were talking about.
    You didn't use many documents but the ones you decided to use were really good because you knew what they were about and you were to explain them and defend your thesis with them. Also great job stating the quotes and documents.
    your evidence was good as well just in some point i felt like you were summer rising a little to much but it was good in a way because you know what your talking about.
    Your writing style was really well organized and well written because you organized your ideas and was able to explain each of them with evidence and back up your ideas as well.
    Your error level wasn't bad not to many little mistakes. There were only some like spelling and very little grammar mistakes but overall it was really good.
    You used really good documents and good quotes also you did really good job on explaining each quote you used.

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